Story Time
Following is a story I am currently working on. I am looking for honest feedback. If you are so inclined, give it a read, then answer these questions for me (and feel free to add any other comments):
What do you like about the story? Dislike?
What kind of person is the main character? Did you care about her?
Where you interested to know what happened? How did the ending make you feel?
Thank you for your help!